the only reason I'm giving this one a rating of any kind is cuz it shocked the HELL outta me. wasn't expecting that ending whatsoever.....just..just WTF MAN ?!?! XD
That was disturbing, disgusting, and funny as hell all at the same time. I don't know whether to laugh, cry, or sit in a corner in my room and try to erase those images out of my head....Nice work though XD
I like the animation and the delivery was good, but the subject of thisanimation brought something to mind; what if coach and the spitter had felatio?...melted penor anyone?
And I thouoght the comic was good....
After the first time I saw the original trailer you posted for this i had to check the comic out. Although full blown gore ain't my thing, I thought the story was definitely worth-while for a read. Now to see this is just a kick in the face. Once again, your animation and storytelling styles have got me on edge for the first episode. I can't wait to see just what insanity Fibble gets into in the series.
Definitely one of your darker works.
Other than EFN, I've never really seen such a dark story from you. I'm definitely not saying it's a bad thing, if anything it was great. The story was definitely creepy, The doll itself had a sense of madness covered in cute. The lack of voices for the characters let's the music and actions of the animation carry the story which I believe you used very well. Your animation style and storytelling are always superb to me to begin with, but this definitely gives me reason to keep watching for new things from you. I would love to see a longer version of this. I do understand that this was for a contest and needed to be a certain length so this isn't a gripe, just an opinion. Overall I have to say job very well done.
Excellent flash, but.....
I still think it could have been a bit better. Although I do agree with Pnaruto (everyone has there own style so you can't really criticize them on that) I do feel certain elements could have been better.
1 - The Pacing: As much as i love DBZ in all it's kick-ass splendor, at certain points of the movie I seriously just couldn't keep up with what was going on. It was like my eyes saw it, but my brain died trying to process the information :P. The pacing was just a bit TOO fast at times.
2 - The Sound: it was a bit hard for me to hear the music over the fight. I know that the music sets the tone for any movie, but if the sound effects drown out the music at times it kinda kills the tone of animation as a whole. (My own personal opinion). But if anything this is just a technical problem that can be easily fixed..At least i think so.
3 - The Pokemon: There really isn't a problem here for me. I Actually like how you took the battle's out of the elements of the game. i.e:Giving all the Pokemon one extra move, A 3-on-1 handicapped battle. I truly think it was Genius, especially seeing as it would take about two or three pokemon to take down a legendary like Rayquaza to begin with. But as Pnaruto said: there was no battle damage. It gives the viewer a sense of urgency when they see the side they're rooting for at least a little beaten and tired, adding to the drama of the movie.
And with that I am done. PHEW...Overall the movie is great. I loved almost every minute of it. I definitely would like to see the next part to this one.
Definitely worth a watch
This really shows not only your style influences and creativity, but the flow and evolution of your animation style. I've been watching some of your stuff since i first got on Newgrounds, and I've gotta admit I'm jealous (in a good way). I do mostly story and character design, so full blown animation isn't something that I'm used to. but you almost make this shit look easy. 10 outta 10 for showing exactly what this video is supposed to: your skills as an animator
It just keeps getting better every time....
And that just doesn't go for the story itself. The animation, the quick paced fight scenes, the smooth integration of 3d and sprite animations, Even the close up animations you did did in vector, all of it was magnificent to see. I hear a lot about this series being another DBZ bull crappy rip off, but I don't agree. I've been watching this series since the beggining and have to say that with the progression of the tried and true AND unique story line, the series as a whole just pops to me. Rip off or not, I love this entire series. And by the looks of it the next episode just might be one for the history books.
HAPPY ENDINGS FOR ALL!
I wanted to wait till the end of this series to give it a review, so, here I go.
The storyline is wonderful, very dark yet with the good ending to balance it out. The voice acting was nice but could still have been a bit better. the animation had a somewhat odd feel to it for me bit is still very good. I have to admit, your style of drawing is pretty damn good. and just to make this clear: I WOULD LOVE TO SEE ANOTHER SERIES FROM YOU.
The nine rating isn't for this one part of the series, but for the series as a whole. Great work girl.
BOUT DAMN TIME!!!!!
Short, simple, sweet, and in every sense what anyone who has played Ocarina of Time wants to do to Navi. the animation was tight and i loved every second of this flash.
True animated art at its finest.
This flash is one of the more artistic I've ever seen and not just from the animation perspective. The use of the St. Valentine Massacre as the main story, the different art styles and characters, and how well they actually complemented the mood for each chapter, and the voices for the entire collab gave it a dark, if at one point humorous grimace. The entire collaboration in general was well made and well strung together. Hans, man, it would be a shame if you didn't do another collaboration.
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